Challenges - Athletics

In this piece of writing, we had to write about something that was challenging for us  I used athletics because some sport is hard and some easy.

My DLO that I used was google documents.

It was hard to structure my ideas
It was easy to write the paragraphs

First I planned then I  moved my name across the board and I finished

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Venn Diagram

I used 2 different books and Sally to help me finish this poster we had to explain different feelings in a Venn diagram it was hard and boring but I finished.

My DLO was google drawings.

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Types Of Hooks

I used different stories to help me find different types of hooks.

First, we looked at different stories from different journals then we wrote the first sentence down from each story then found out what hook it was by looking at Sally's example.





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WALT: Structure Our Writing

                                                                           WALT:
                                                                 Structure Our Writing


I used a topic sentence for each paragraph and used the 3 e's per paragraph also which stands for explain example and elaborate it took us a while to figure out the 3 e's and where they go.

It was hard to figure out the perfect place for my e's
It was easy to structure my plan

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Last weeks Rangtahi Festival!

Last Thursday was Rangatahi Festival, 17 schools came to our school Park Estate to perform there was Pasifika groups Kapa Haka groups Indian groups and more it was very entertaining, We had to do no school work because we all had separate jobs I was an ambassador we had to go around and ask people for help, but we was mostly just watching all the performances because no one needed help

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