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Thursday 28 September 2017

Dystopian Future Writing ( Dystopian = Future )

We have been working on this for a couple of weeks now and I have finished writing finally!

I used a lot of plans from whole class lessons and group lessons to finish my writing and I think I have done quite well!


First, I wrote my plan about my future then wrote my first paragraph
Next, We went to groups and finished our body and conclusion
Last, We finished editing and revising



It was easy to figure out technical vocab to fit into words but hard to figure out where to put the sentences


Can you please leave a positive comment to help me progress thanks!


Friday 15 September 2017

Class Expectations Poster

I used our class expectations to make a poster of what we had to do it took us 3 days to finish this because we only had a little bit of time since we had more work to finish I hope it looks cool.`


First, we took pictures of our examples
And then added our sentences
Second, we added arrows
and then we were finished!







I learned to use real life examples instead of online example to make it easier

Google Drawings is a good resource to make posters!

Please leave me positive/thoughtful comment thanks - Matrix

Friday 1 September 2017

WALT: Use facts to support our ideas

WALT: Use facts to support our ideas

I used ideas from the internet


1st I researched on google some facts to help the world 
The DLO I used was google docs
I learned how to use facts to support my writing
The easy part was writing the facts into my story but it was hard to group in my ideas.


I learned how to structure my writing into paragraphs


Thanks for reading my story please leave me a thoughtful comment!